2009年6月英語六級考前熱點高分范文(五)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)當今的大學生要面臨很多來自不同方面的壓力

　　2)大學生緩解壓力的方式有…

　　3)你一般都是如何排解壓力的?

　　How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一個問題，提綱第2點要求說明如何解決該問題，提綱第3點要求闡述“我”的做法，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：指出當今的大學生主要面臨哪些壓力;列舉大學生緩解壓力的方式;談談“我”是采取哪種方式排解壓力的。

　　高分范文

　　How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?

　　Today’s college students face many pressures, mainly from parents’ expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. [1]Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. [2]More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.

　　[3]Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. [2]First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves [4]so as to [5]make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. [2]Second, we should [6]set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. [2]Third, [7]attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. [2]Finally, if you find pressure is nearly [8]beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.

　　[2]As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. [4]In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. [2]So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I [9]do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation.

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]although引導讓步狀語從句。

　　[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。

　　[3]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。