2010年6月英語六級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及范文(上海新東方版)

　　真題：Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese

　　1。 近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象;

　　2。 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果;

　　3。 我認(rèn)為…

　　點(diǎn)評(píng):

　　六級(jí)考試的作文體現(xiàn)了六級(jí)在出題上一貫穩(wěn)健的作風(fēng)，這篇文章就是反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)過的現(xiàn)象解決型的文章。

　　這篇文章的第一段是一個(gè)提出問題的段落，應(yīng)當(dāng)采用提出問題段落的結(jié)構(gòu)思路去寫，這個(gè)段落的結(jié)構(gòu)和歷年考察過的校園浪費(fèi)增加，出國(guó)旅游越來越多，盜版泛濫，虛假廣告泛濫這些段落的結(jié)構(gòu)思路是完全一樣的。

　　第二段是一個(gè)將原因列舉和后果列舉結(jié)合起來的比較長(zhǎng)的一個(gè)段落，這個(gè)段落出現(xiàn)了列舉段結(jié)構(gòu)的重疊，中文學(xué)習(xí)被忽視的原因包括目前中國(guó)的學(xué)校教育過分強(qiáng)調(diào)英語的重要性，市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展催生了對(duì)外語使用的需求所以中文被忽略了，現(xiàn)在的國(guó)際交流越來越多促使學(xué)生把精力都放在學(xué)習(xí)英語等外語上導(dǎo)致學(xué)中文時(shí)間很少，很多家長(zhǎng)和老師覺得中文沒有必要花時(shí)間去學(xué)等。后果列舉起來的話包括學(xué)生的母語寫作能力下降，母語口頭表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，整個(gè)民族的文化傳統(tǒng)沒有被很好地繼承，因語言而生的自豪感體現(xiàn)不出來，中文所包含的文學(xué)類的東西沒有被很好地理解。

　　第三段是一個(gè)典型的建議措施列舉段，我們可以采取什么樣的方法去提高我們的中文表達(dá)能力呢?諸如在認(rèn)識(shí)上提高對(duì)中文學(xué)習(xí)的重視，認(rèn)識(shí)到學(xué)習(xí)母語是提高外語水平的基礎(chǔ)，文化的繼承要以學(xué)習(xí)中文為基礎(chǔ)，學(xué)校要重視中文教育，家長(zhǎng)要從小培養(yǎng)自己的孩子的中文水平，國(guó)家應(yīng)該通過各種比賽和獎(jiǎng)金來提高學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)中文的積極性。

　　六級(jí)作文范文

　　Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

　　1. 如今很多學(xué)生不重視中文學(xué)習(xí)

　　2. 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果

　　3. 我認(rèn)為

　　(普通應(yīng)試版)

　　Currently, there is a growing concern for difficulty in the mother tongue language among university students. Foreign language learning, not Chinese, has become a common occurrence on our campus. Obviously, more  and more experts are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of this problem.

　　A number of reasons can be easily found for this. For one thing, students pay more attention to English study than Chinese training. For another thing, the companies, especially the gainful employment, focus on the candidates' foreign language skills. What's more, Chinese plays a less important role in university courses. In other words, teachers also feel unnecessary to hold further studies on Chinese. Consequently, language learners found inability in gaining English successfully, or they may feel having difficulties in understanding in other languages.

　　As far as I am concerned, the correct  and exact expression in Chinese ought to be the primary concern for foreign languages studies, which means Chinese, our mother tongue, is the foundation for understanding, expressing and learning other languages. Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the above situation.

　　(作文高手版)

　　Recently it often hits headlines of newspapers that some prestigious universities like Tongji exclude Chinese from the subjects to be tested in their practice of independent admission. This has aroused heated discussion among the public -- Is Chinese not so important as English? What if we neglect the study of our mother tongue?

　　First of all, globalization counts much for this phenomenon. In modern society, information in most media, be it the Internet or newspaper, is conveyed in English. As a saying goes, one can go to every corner of the world without any difficulty in communicating with local people. Unfortunately, while we emphasize the importance of English, we underrate the value of Chinese though China has been developing at an amazing speed.

　　But neglecting the study of Chinese is extremely harmful if the situation is left unfettered. The major harm is that China’s traditional value is likely to get lost because language  and ideas are interlocked in most cases. For example, when interviewed, most youngsters show that they are quite unfamiliar with some famous figures and their sayings.

　　To sum up, many reasons are responsible for the phenomenon and it will do us harm if we leave the situation as it is. Faced with the problem, we are expected to take effective measures. For one thing, the government should work out rules to ensure the time for the study of Chinese in school. Only in this way, can we find a cure for the problem.