考研英語(yǔ)大作文寫作攻略及近十年真題作文剖析

  2006年考研英語(yǔ)寫作分為A、B兩部分。以下對(duì)這兩部分分別加以介紹。
Part A
51. Directions:
　　You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
　　Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

　　在考研英語(yǔ)中，這是第二次考查應(yīng)用文寫作，模式仍是書信體。因此，像2005年一樣，考生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.覆蓋全部信息；2.注意格式和語(yǔ)域；3.語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容合理；4.不要過(guò)多使用指令中的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。今年的寫作主題是希望工程，這是1995年和2001年考研作文中曾經(jīng)兩次涉及過(guò)的話題。一般考生應(yīng)覺(jué)得有內(nèi)容發(fā)揮。不過(guò)，今年的應(yīng)用文指令部分比去年要難一些，為方便考生復(fù)習(xí)，特將指令中關(guān)鍵的第一段翻譯出來(lái)，供考生參考：

　　你打算資助邊遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的一個(gè)孩子，為希望工程做點(diǎn)貢獻(xiàn)。給有關(guān)單位寫一封信，請(qǐng)他們幫助尋找一個(gè)候選的孩子。你應(yīng)當(dāng)詳細(xì)說(shuō)明你需要幫助的那個(gè)孩子的情況，以及你將如何實(shí)施你的資助計(jì)劃。
根據(jù)以上要求，考生在寫作中應(yīng)注意三個(gè)信息點(diǎn)： 1.說(shuō)明自己的想法和要求； 2.介紹孩子的情況；3.如何實(shí)施資助計(jì)劃。小作文命題看得出頗費(fèi)心機(jī)，刻意考一種按常規(guī)難以歸類的書信模式，但不難寫。同學(xué)們只要照指令的情景和提綱部分?jǐn)U展出100字就行。
Part B
52. Directions:
　　Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should
　　1. describe the photos briefly,
　　2. interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and
　　3. give your point of view.
You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

　　2006年短文寫作還是圖畫作文。給了兩幅畫面，一幅是一個(gè)人臉上刻著貝克漢姆的名字，另一幅是一個(gè)人花了300元剪了一個(gè)小貝的發(fā)型，兩幅圖均透露出社會(huì)上一些人崇拜偶像的現(xiàn)象，讓考生對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象做出評(píng)價(jià)，很新鮮、靈活。感覺(jué)以往的英語(yǔ)作文試題大多考傳統(tǒng)型的，如孝敬父母，毅力恒心等，這次讓人很意外。

　　考生在看到大作文的第一眼是感覺(jué)親切而高興，覺(jué)得非常有趣，很有東西寫。因?yàn)樨惪藵h姆對(duì)年輕人來(lái)說(shuō)，實(shí)在是太熟悉太有誘惑力了，小貝的出場(chǎng)，無(wú)論對(duì)男生女生，通常引起的都是狂熱與奔放。但是此時(shí)要靜下心來(lái)，邏輯嚴(yán)密、條理清晰、有條不紊地去論述一下偶像崇拜的問(wèn)題，很多考生馬上又坐不住板凳了。要么提筆忘字，要么干脆無(wú)話可言，再或者干巴巴說(shuō)幾句就再也不能繼續(xù)下去。其實(shí)，文章探討的主題應(yīng)該是當(dāng)今社會(huì)出現(xiàn)的年輕人對(duì)明星盲目崇拜的現(xiàn)象。只要圍繞這個(gè)主題寫就行，至于從哪個(gè)角度去討論，自己的具體看法是什么，那不是最重要的。關(guān)鍵是考生的文章觀點(diǎn)要明確而清晰，尤其是，詞句的表達(dá)要流暢規(guī)范。

　　圖畫作文通常寫法：第一段揭示現(xiàn)象，描述圖畫；第二段發(fā)表自己對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的分析議論；第三段針對(duì)該現(xiàn)象提出自己的看法或發(fā)出自己的倡導(dǎo)�？蓪懶院軓�(qiáng)。

二、經(jīng)典范文賞析
Part A 范文

Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m a teacher of Renmin University of China and I’d like to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote part of your province. Therefore,I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding such a child who has met the following requirements:
First,he must be very poor and truly in need of help. Second,he must have the strong desire to improve things around him. Third, he must be healthy, happy and optimistic. Last but not the least is that he must be willing to return to his hometown to do something for it after graduation from university.
I would send him money every year from this year on until he finishes his higher education.Your prompt reply to this letter would be highly appreciated. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely Yours,

Li Ming

譯文

親愛(ài)的先生/女士：
我是中國(guó)人民大學(xué)的一名老師。我想為希望工程做點(diǎn)貢獻(xiàn)，打算資助你省邊遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的一個(gè)孩子。因此，如果你能提供符合以下條件的一個(gè)孩子信息給我，我將不勝感激：
第一，他必須很窮，真的需要幫助。第二，他必須有強(qiáng)烈的愿望，想要改善他周圍的事物。第三，他必須健康、快樂(lè)，并且樂(lè)觀。最后一點(diǎn)但很重要的一點(diǎn)是，大學(xué)畢業(yè)后他必須愿意回到他的家鄉(xiāng)為家鄉(xiāng)做貢獻(xiàn)。
我將從今年開(kāi)始每年都給他寄錢，直到他完成高等教育。盼望你盡快回信。
李明
黃金句型

I’d like to contribute to...
我想為……做貢獻(xiàn)。

I would be most grateful if you...
如果你……我將不勝感激。

Last but not the least is that...
最后一點(diǎn)但很重要的一點(diǎn)是……

Your... would be highly appreciated.
盼望你……

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
盼望你的來(lái)信。

Part B 范文
There are two pictures:The first is a photo of a man’s face on which the name of the famous football player Beckham can be seen. In the second picture we can see a man in a barbershop, his hair being done in Beckham’s hair style, costing him 300 yuan.
Obviously,the two persons are fans of Beckham.These pictures, although a little exaggerating and satirical at first glance, can make us ponder: why does this phenomenon appear?As is known to all, with the development of modern communications, more and more people are influenced by some so�瞔alled “stars”. Therefore,we have many fans who run after and imitate them－film stars,athletic stars, even stars of super�瞘irl singers. First,they do so because they admire them and want to obtain their fame and reputation. Second, although there is no denying the fact that some people do this out of pure adiration, yet, some just want to become wealthy overnight－without hard work, without sweat, just effortlessly.
Anyway, in my opinion, our government must educate our people－especially the youth－that some famous people get their reputation because they have made great contribution to our society－such as Liu Xiang. And we ourselves also must understand that their achievement is not easy job. We’d better turn our admiration into practical action to learn from them so that we can make even greater contribution to our country in the future.

譯文
這里有兩幅圖：第一張是一個(gè)人臉上寫著著名足球運(yùn)動(dòng)員貝克漢姆的名字。第二張我們可以看見(jiàn)一個(gè)人在理發(fā)店里，他讓理發(fā)師按照貝克漢姆的發(fā)型給他做頭發(fā)，花了300元。
很明顯，這兩人是貝克漢姆的崇拜者。這些圖片，盡管第一眼看上去有些夸張和諷刺，仍然可以使我們深思：為什么會(huì)發(fā)生這種現(xiàn)象？眾所周知的是：隨著現(xiàn)代傳媒的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人都被這樣的“明星”影響。因此，有很多追隨和模仿他們的追星族——電影明星，體育明星，甚至“超女”歌星。第一，他們這樣做是因?yàn)樗麄兂绨菟麄儯�想得到他們的名聲。第二，盡管不可否認(rèn)的是一些人這么做純粹是出于崇拜，但是，也有一些人只是想一夜暴富——不需努力工作，不需流汗，只是無(wú)需努力。
以我的觀點(diǎn)，無(wú)論如何，我們的政府都必須教育人民——尤其是年輕人—— 一些著名的人得到他們的聲譽(yù)是因?yàn)樗麄優(yōu)槲覀兊纳鐣?huì)做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)——比如劉翔。我們自己必須理解他們的成就是不容易的。我們最好將我們的崇拜轉(zhuǎn)化為學(xué)習(xí)他們的實(shí)際行動(dòng)，這樣我們才能在將來(lái)為我們國(guó)家做出更大的貢獻(xiàn)。
黃金句型

These pictures, although a little exaggerating and satirical at first glance, can make us ponder...
這些圖片，盡管第一眼看上去有些夸張和諷刺，仍然可以使我們深思……

As is known to all...
眾所周知的是……

Although there is no denying the fact that...
盡管不可否認(rèn)的是……